wow the first to me feels like a champion. I like how you have used brettonian parts, it makes them seem more knightly and concidering they started off from the order, it just fits.
Yea, want for the knightly look after seeing a few of the DA pics from the Horus Heresy visions books. Might try and paint the captain tomorrow.
The Freehand is coming along nicely.
Now you need to keep practing, try to work on gettiing the black a bit smoother.(easier said than done I'm working on a black jumpack squad and am having a hard time getting it perfect too)
Just looked at the pics as they show, they look a lot worse when concerned with the black in reality the highlights are a lot more subtle