Heres where you can post your comments on the submitted writing to the episode.

:lol: :lol: :lol: Awwww, that was good!!!!! (thumbs up) (thumbs up) Glad you posted it -- p***ing myself over here!!! I think I know one of the ways Max could meet his girlfriend now!!!! :lol: (Excit) (Excit)

Glad you liked it Han! I hope it gives people an insight into what writing it will be like! :lol: I bet its put you all off! :lol:

I know when i wrote it the first time i kept changing it until i was happy with it, i must of completly re-wrote it about 5 times to get it right! and its not even a long scene!

I read this a few weeks ago and thought it was excellant don't know how i'll match it though.

Course you will! I think you'll write something really good judging from your post's over the year! Even i think i can do better than that scene!

Excellent start there Kay1, I like it.

How do writers go about doing their stint? Is there a rota?

I only ask as writers won't want to do the work on a next scene only to find someone else has done it already if you know what I mean...do we volunteer to do the next stint? what is best?

Love
Marlene

After somebody has written their bit, we'll lock the thread and then ask who would like to coninue it. Because people might not be able to submit their bit on time if we had a rota system, so we'll do it like that.

As long as everybody who wants to add a bit to it does so then i'm happy! It dosn't matter if one person writes more than the other.

But yes interesting point marlene! :) And i'm glad you liked it! :D

A thought: It's probably a good idea that people let on which bit they're trying though. Saves duplicating what people are working on.

For example, Kay1's contribution has given me a kick up the arse to try and put something together.

A good point there Han!

We'll sort something out soon concerening a writing pattern, but after seeing somebodys latest submission to the script people might have a great scene to follow on from it and will want to write the next bit!

Also if you want to pair up with somebody and work on a joint part of the script your more than welcome! I'm thiking of pairing up with somebody, because 2 heads are better than one arn't they!

wow thats excellent johnny!!! i'm amazed at how professianal that sounds! (thumbs up)

yeh thats a great start to the episode! (thumbs up)
well done johnny! :)

Han your scene was brilliant!!!! i thought it was great,don't know which ending i would prefer though :wacko: there all good to be honest (thumbs up)

Loving your scene Han! ^_^ :D

Oh my god Han!!!

You've written a superb scene there!! I'd go with the first ending! I loved the build up to paddy saying 'yeah of course she is!'

Now we need the scene written before this where the police or something closes the brothel!

Any takers? :lol:

Well thank you everyone. Wasn't too sure about it, thought it was rushed (but I put that already!!! :lol:). Tried to make it as open as possible without tying anyone into anything that couldn't be tweaked!!

And we have to have the committee arranging the night -- can't forget that!!! ;)

If you want to go with the first ending, we need to have them discussing that before too!!

*claps* Getting right into this writing lark!!!!

Ahhh han your on the ball! :lol: Yer of course we need those scenes written aswell! :lol: So who feels they can write it??

I'm suprised you said it was rushed actually because it seemed very well written! There were quite a few hidden gags which made me laugh which pheonix nights does best! Great work han! (thumbs up)

Awwww. You're making me blush now!!!!! *coy*

yeh han your scene was amazin'!
i think i'd go with the first ending aswell tho.
anyway, great work han (thumbs up) well done

Whoa guys I'm hugely impressed by what I'm seeing so far! You're a very talented bunch, I'm loving it! (thumbs up)

Please get the other Phoenix characters in there too though. Ray Von, Kenny, Young Kenny, Alan and Les, Holy Mary, and of course Jerry! (Kar)

Don't worry Haze -- I'm sure they'll get in there somehow!!!

guys think i'm going to have to bow it if this is going to be the standard cos i really don't think i can write anything anywhere near as good as what Han and Kay1 have written :unsure:

Kay1 when your next on msn i'll sort somthings out so we can progress more with this,

Don't be daft!! Have a bit of faith -- I'm sure whatever you do'll be fab. Besides, as Kay1 said earlier, you can always work on something with someone else!!! :D

You'll be reet!!! (thumbs up) (thumbs up)

Ah guys it'll be fine! If your finding it hard just grab a partner and work on it together! It would be great if we could have a little bit from everybody! :)

Yeah Ian i'll speak to you about it when i see you on msn

Ian your scene is brilliant,i'm really impressed at everybody so far,it sounds fantastic (thumbs up)

err, sorry to be a pain but where is ian's part?
i cant find it! LOL :lol:

It was on the Idea thread .... but then it disappeared!! It was good though!!!! ;)

oh ok, thanks han (thumbs up)

He took it off because he wants to make changes to it!

Should be on soon though, i've got the second scene written. I just need to get it typed up, Hopefully i'll get it done tonight, if not i'll have it on by friday!

thanks kay1! (thumbs up)
by saying that i didnt mean to rush anybody by the way,after reading it again it sounds like i meant hurry up, so i never meant it to sound like that! (do you understand that???? :wacko: ) lol

Nice second part there Kay1... I will have to get around to starting my bit soon... although I do have most of it planned out in my mind - thats where I do most of my writing !!

Cheers Dawn! I've just had to read over it again and change some of the mistakes! :lol: But thats all in a days work!

Extremely looking forward to your contribution! In my mind you have the best scene to write! :D

Two down, Two to go for me! Gonna make a start on my third bit this weekend

That was good. :lol: Love the bit with his wheels!!! And Joyce and the copper!!! Fab!!!!

Cheers me dear!! :lol: It was a great laugh writing it!

And yet again half the stuff in it i only thought of this afternoon! The bits with the scallys and joyce were added on when i was typing it up! :D

Well, you're very welcome m'love!!! :lol:

It's great when something just comes to you, isn't it!!! :lol:

Fantastico Ian!!! I loved all of it! A couple of secret gags thrown in their thats what i like to see! :lol:

You up for writing any more! Quite impressed me that has! :)

which bits are left?

Check the 'Writing Structure' thread, it has a list of what bits are left to write

Or if you want to add your own scene your more than welcome

I'll pick one when the first part of the episode is posted so i know the setting etc.

Dear god donna! I've been p*ssing myself here reading your new scene! That whole jerry/brian meeting was so funny!!!!!!!!!! You should definetly become a comedy scriptwriter in your spare time! :lol:

And i can't believe you said your scenes wouldn't be on a par with our scenes! Shame on you! :lol: I'm so glad we got you on board with this writing thing! :)

Looking forward to your last scene coming up! :D