Title: Chris and Mµ
leeuwen12 - May 24, 2008 05:30 PM (GMT)
this is me and my navi If you're wondering what this has to do with SD well it like this
chris>mad scientist Chris>Dark Shuriken>Shadow Dweller
I gave him a bow
chris>mad scientist Chris>Dark Shuriken>Shadow Dweller
I gave him a bow
Sanderino - May 25, 2008 08:31 AM (GMT)
Nice ;) But i think your'e Navi needs more details
DarkElpizo - May 25, 2008 10:13 AM (GMT)
its way to easy to see that he just has more pointy things
nothing more
im used better from you leeuwen
nothing more
im used better from you leeuwen
leeuwen12 - May 25, 2008 11:04 AM (GMT)
yeah I know I posted him here so you could help me make him more custom
Exceeding Light - May 25, 2008 03:12 PM (GMT)
Try drawing what you want him to look like and try to sprite those details so that he'll look less like a pointed Cosmoman (or w/e) recolor.
leeuwen12 - May 25, 2008 03:26 PM (GMT)
But I don't know what he should look like so you may decide what I do to him
Cepheus - May 25, 2008 03:46 PM (GMT)
They look good, but your navi is a little bland, and the green is too bright. Mµ dosen't make much sense either because µ itself is pronounced 'moo'. Mµ would be pronounced 'mmoo'.
leeuwen12 - May 25, 2008 03:53 PM (GMT)
yeah it's just Mu and the green is just right i actually darkened it more then i actually wanted to
Megaboy08 - May 25, 2008 06:53 PM (GMT)
i like the idea of your navi but it needs more details and colors :D
DragonZero - May 25, 2008 07:42 PM (GMT)
Hm... I think I agree with most of the others here: he could use more detail, the Colors are still a bit too bright (Just on his Head/Shoulders), and he could use a bit more detail.
Though I think he still looks a lot like CosmoMan. He needs more Editing, in my Opinion.
Though I think he still looks a lot like CosmoMan. He needs more Editing, in my Opinion.
leeuwen12 - May 25, 2008 08:34 PM (GMT)
| QUOTE (DragonZero @ May 25 2008, 07:42 PM) |
| Hm... I think I agree with most of the others here: he could use more detail, the Colors are still a bit too bright (Just on his Head/Shoulders), and he could use a bit more detail. Though I think he still looks a lot like CosmoMan. He needs more Editing, in my Opinion. |
I know I have to edit him for that I need you guys to come up with ideas but so far I've got a new question:
wich one
leeuwen12 - May 26, 2008 08:17 PM (GMT)
UPDATE!!!
because no one had an opinion I started on my own he's gonna have a bow and I'm starting on the sheet
it's the same link at the top
because no one had an opinion I started on my own he's gonna have a bow and I'm starting on the sheet
it's the same link at the top
Megaboy08 - May 26, 2008 08:28 PM (GMT)
ok i cant wait to see your changes :D
Kilik 64 - May 27, 2008 06:45 AM (GMT)
I unless you are prepared to scratch quite a bit, then Cosmoman is a really bad base navi...
leeuwen12 - May 27, 2008 01:33 PM (GMT)
yes I'm gonna do a lot of scrath
Kilik 64 - May 28, 2008 10:41 PM (GMT)
I hope so... Btw, nice bow.
Exceeding Light - May 28, 2008 10:43 PM (GMT)
Uhh... he's holding the bow with the wrong hand. Take it from someone who shoots arrows, you don't hold it by the string.
leeuwen12 - May 29, 2008 04:04 AM (GMT)
he doesnit hold it by the string but maybe you're right I'll try the other hand
Bassxx - May 29, 2008 10:46 AM (GMT)
You hold it by the bow, because if you hold the string then you'll probably get hurt.
leeuwen12 - May 29, 2008 12:32 PM (GMT)
| QUOTE (Bassxx @ May 29 2008, 10:46 AM) |
| You hold it by the bow, because if you hold the string then you'll probably get hurt. |
i think you're right... :)
changed the bow(same link)
Kilik 64 - May 29, 2008 07:19 PM (GMT)
His body is too still using the bow. Also, he doesn't need to hold the string.
leeuwen12 - May 29, 2008 07:45 PM (GMT)
That's only the first frame so he's gonna move and I like him holding the string
leeuwen12 - June 30, 2008 12:20 PM (GMT)
UPDATE!!! I made the W.A.R. mode but It's missing something...but what? wings? horns?