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Title: Mosaic #7: Pipe's Story
Description: artwork by ?? colors by Roady


Roadbuster - May 5, 2008 03:48 PM (GMT)
lines/inks: unknown at the moment
colors: Roadbuster

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Prisma Nova - May 6, 2008 04:40 PM (GMT)
The only thing I find as a negative (and it is very small) is the clouds, even in the last panel. I would soften them a bit more. Keep the layer of the clouds, copy-past a copy at the bottom, and blur it a bit. That way, clouds are defined, but they will be softer, not cotton-like.

Nice stuff, Roadbuster.

Roadbuster - May 6, 2008 04:48 PM (GMT)
Yeah, I see what you mean, they seem incongruous with the rest of the pic. I didn't want to blur them toooooo much because they were actually drawn in there (I removed the lines, which is already pushing my luck. Some inkers/pencilers can get touchy about that kind of thing) But they would have looked better a bit more dispersed.




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