artwork... eh. Cartoony.
colors... eh. shadings ok, but the colors seem a little oversaturated (which seems to be popular right now at any rate)
dialogue... yuck.
ok, the only TF we actually see is Runabout in car mode, and a mouth. The mouth i'm guessing is Megatron. Does he have a bolt for a tongue ring or something?
Wow, that looks like total ass. Oh well, so much for the hope in this book. I reeeaaally hate the oversaturated colors.
Well, I'm not sure about "total ass". . . Although, my idea of ass is skewed somewhat, since I've looked at a lot of amateur/beginners' "manga".
The saturation is a little bit suspect, though, I agree. Also, I get the feeling that this will be another one of those projects where you sit there thinking "Hey, remember me, the reader? I wanna see the Transformers!"