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Name: Marix
Gender: Male
Age: 23
Sexual Preference: female
Rank: Journeyman Weaver
Appearance: Marix is a tall and rather flexible person. He has very defined muscle structure. Sporting a six pack and loves to walk around bare-chested. His eyes are a deep brown color with light brows that have never seen stress or worry. Dusty blond hair that reaches his neck line that he always has tied behind his head in a pony tail. He always tries to keep himself in top physical performance. His Tanned body proof of his Southern Haritage.
Hair Color: Dusty blond
Eye Color: brown
Height: 5’11’’ (sorry but It was a mis-type of a number lol)
Weight: 152lb
Personality: Marix loves to be the center of attention. If he isn’t he tries to be. Has a smooth attitude about things that happens around him, though he doesn’t like insubordination at all. If there is any he will quickly put it out. Though being raised and born in Southern Hold he became a very relaxed individual. Always taking things in short strides never hurrying to do anything.
History:
Marix was born and raised in Southern Hold. Raised as a fruit picker (by family trade) was struck sick and bed ridden for a full turn. During this trial he turned to weaving… something that he could do and not over stress himself. Though he never really apprenticed he was pretty decent at it. So when he was finally able to get out of bed he went to the Weavers Hall in Southern. Where he apprenticed and got stronger. Vowing never to become weak again he toned his body.
Many turns later he became a Journeyman Weaver and was selected to go to Hurricane Hold, where he would apprentice under their Master Weaver, Jorgon. Though he was getting older in the years he would train a Journeyman till he could take his place.
Once packed he reported to his Lord Holder for some sort of audience. He was told that he would deliver a clutch of fire-lizard eggs to the Kharasi Weyr. And that he would report to the Southern Weyr to ride dragon back to the Kharasi Weyr itself.
Family: Julet (mother) Stave (father) Gill (sister)
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Dragon: N/A
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Pets: N/A
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Accepted, but before you play... please go back and spell 'Kharasi' correctly. LOL. When in doubt, scroll all the way up and look at the banner that says 'Kharasi Weyr' on it for spelling ;D
There are gonna be a lot of words you get spelling errors for in Firefox, like Weyr and Kharasi and many dragon names... as well as words like Weyrleader and dragonrider, just to give you a heads up.
Other than that, I like how you put together this character sheet. It is certainly an improvement from your first one, and I'm not talking about spelling either but just how it's written. It gives a lot more information about the character.
One thing... you really consider 5'4" tall? That's actually how tall I am XD I think the wording you are looking for is maybe he has a very 'long' looking body type with long legs and arms even though he is short. Tall would be more like 5'11" to 6'2"